iron Floor Please tell me,How to remove IRON BURNED marks from laminated floor?
I am leaving in a rented flat and IRON BURNED marks are there on my laminated floor since August 07. I didn't do anything till date but now i am leaving this flat so before leaving I want to remove this burn mark from floor as my land lady doesn't know yet about this.
Hi,you will need to replace the laminate.Take a piece up & see if you can get a match.Good Luck
There's no snake charmer involved with this mysteriously rising chain. The Arteriors Paxton Floor Lamp stands on its strength, made of wrought iron and topped by a Natural linen shade with a Smoke Gray cotton lining. A unique look for the Restoration living room or soft contemporary den. Since 1987, Texas-based Arteriors has paired timeless concepts with a nod to the latest looks, offering home lighting with unique character and enduring presence. The lighting from Arteriors is ideal for both transitional interiors and modern homes, capturing a flavor that reflects the trends and traditions of lighting design across the world. The Arteriors Paxton Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Natural linen shade with Smoke Gray cotton liningWrought iron chain baseNatural Iron finish3-way switchUL ListedLighting: One 150 Watt 120 Volt Type E26 Incandescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 5 days. Dimensions: Fixture: Height 72 In. Shade: Diameter 20 In.
The Bover Ferrara Floor Lamp uses rustic metal work to evoke the arts and crafts tradition in this full range lighting collection. The Ferrara Floor Lamp features a raw cotton or parchment shade with upper frosted polycarbonate diffuser paired with a Graphite Brown or Black iron body. The Bover collection, made in Barcelona, is inspired by the light playing within the sky and sea. Balancing quality and form resulting in a non-temporal style capable of adapting comfortably to future times. Bover's products range from ceiling lights, pendants, and wall sconces to floor and table lamps. The Bover Ferrara Floor Lamp is available with the following: Included Features:Flared shade.Frosted polycarbonate upper diffuser.Iron body.Foot switch on cord.UL Listed.Options:Finish: Black Iron (shown), or Graphite Brown Iron.Lamping: Fluorescent, or Incandescent.Shade: Cotton (shown), or Parchment.Lighting:Fluorescent option utilizes two 13 Watt 120 Volt Type GU24 Fluorescent lamps (not included).Incandescent option utilizes two 60 Watt 120 Volt Type A-19 Incandescent lamps (not included).Shipping: This item usually ships in 6-8 weeks. Dimensions: Fixture: Height 66.14 In., Overall Diameter 16.54 In. Base: Overall Diameter 11.81 In. Shade: Upper Diameter 12.99 In., Lower Diameter 16.54 In., Height 9.06 In.
The Pablo Umbrella Floor Lamp designed by Pablo Pardo, 1997 composes a stylish look where anyone can be a model with its photo-studio inspired lamp. The Umbrella Floor Lamp features lycra fabric shade, die-cast iron body and Silver finish. Pablo, founded in 1993 by Venezuelan-born Pablo Pardo, designs and manufactures innovative lighting and home accessories characterized by uncompromising devotion to simplicity and utility. The Pablo Umbrella Floor Lamp is available with the following: Included Features:One lycra fabric shade.Die-cast iron body with stainless steel shaft.Silver finish.Full range dimmer switch.Fully adjustable.Designed by Pablo Pardo.Options:Diffuser: Black, Ice Blue, Plum, Silver, or White (shown).Lighting: One 100 Watt 120 Volt Type A-19 Incandescent lamp (included). Shipping: This item usually ships within three- to five business days. Dimensions: Fixture: Height 55 In. Base: Diameter 10.5 In. Shade: Diameter 19 In.
The Arteriors Griffith Floor Lamp adds warm light and a subtle retro accent to modern spaces. The rich lighting effect is courtesy of the drum of White irregular pleated paper. This textural shade sits atop a strong and stable wrought iron bar base, finished entirely in a deep contrasting Bronze. Since 1987, Texas-based Arteriors has paired timeless concepts with a nod to the latest looks, offering home lighting with unique character and enduring presence. The lighting from Arteriors is ideal for both transitional interiors and modern homes, capturing a flavor that reflects the trends and traditions of lighting design across the world. The Arteriors Griffith Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Drum-shaped White irregular pleated paper shadeWrought iron baseBronze finishDouble socketFoot dimmer switchUL ListedLighting: Two 60 Watt 120 Volt Type E26 Incandescent lamps (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 5 days. Dimensions: Fixture: Height 68.25 In., Diameter 22 In.
The Arteriors Parrish Floor Lamp offers a unique spin on the traditional floor lamp. Its simple yet distinctive design suggests a contemporary take on Restoration style, enhanced by a clear glass shade and visible lamping. The Parrish also features an inline foot switch. Since 1987, Texas-based Arteriors has paired timeless concepts with a nod to the latest looks, offering home lighting with unique character and enduring presence. The lighting from Arteriors is ideal for both transitional interiors and modern homes, capturing a flavor that reflects the trends and traditions of lighting design across the world. The Arteriors Parrish Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Clear glass shadeWrought iron baseAntique Bronze finishOn-off foot switchUL ListedLighting: One 60 Watt 120 Volt Type B10 Medium Base Incandescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 5 days. Dimensions: Shade: Diameter 10 In., Height 12.5 In. Fixture: Height 67 In.
The sculptural Tous Floor Lamp evokes the rich tradition of hand-forged metal work. With a shade made of raw cotton or parchment, this pendant is a comfortable blend of strength and delicate beauty. A light and airy fixture for the soft contemporary home. The Bover collection, made in Barcelona, is inspired by the light playing within the sky and sea. Balancing quality and form resulting in a non-temporal style capable of adapting comfortably to future times. Bover's products range from ceiling lights, pendants, and wall sconces to floor and table lamps. The Bover Tous Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Flared shadeHand-forged metal bodyFoot switch on cordUL ListedDesigned by Joana BoverOptions:Finish: Black Iron (shown), or Graphite Brown Iron.Lamping: Fluorescent, or Incandescent.Shade: Cotton (shown), or Parchment.Lighting:Fluorescent option utilizes one 18 Watt 120 Volt Type GU24 Fluorescent lamp (not included).Incandescent option utilizes one 100 Watt 120 Volt Type A-19 Incandescent lamp (not included).Shipping: This item usually ships in 6-8 weeks. Dimensions: Shade: Height 10.24 In., Upper Diameter 9.84 In., Lower Diameter 15.75 In. Fixture: Height 67.32 In., Overall Diameter 15.75 In. Base: Overall Diameter 11.81 In.
The Kichler High Country Floor Lamp elevates the rustic, outdoor look to a work of art. The rods and ribbons of hand-formed steel that make up each piece are layered with an exclusive Olde Iron finish. The High Country Floor Lamp features an Oatmeal Linen glass shade. Since 1938, Cleveland-based Kichler Lighting has created exceptional lighting in a variety of styles, finishes, colors and designs. With a diverse collection of indoor and outdoor lighting in classic and contemporary styles, Kichler Lighting always focuses on making home lighting that is both beautiful and functional. The Kichler High Country Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Oatmeal Linen glass shadeOlde Iron finish2 on/off pull chainsUL ListedCSA ApprovedLighting: Two 60 Watt 120 Volt Medium Base Incandescent lamps (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 3-5 days. Dimensions: Fixture: Width 19 In., Height 61 In.
The Marset TXL Floor Lamp was designed by Joan Gaspar to illuminate exterior spaces with all the warmth and style of an interior floor lamp. The flared shade is made out of ribbons of Off-White water-resistant textilene (fiberglass and plastic) fabric. This sits safely atop a cast iron stem and square slate base. Available in two sizes. Marset is a Barcelona-based company dedicated to creating warm contemporary lighting with a underlying sense of comfort and character, enhancing otherwise impersonal residential and commercial spaces. The Marset mood is minimalist, subtle, with an aesthetic appeal that stems from an "illuminate, not dazzle" philosophy. Located in Fort Lauderdale, Florida, Tango is a U.S. distributor of contemporary European lighting founded in 1997. Tango Lighting specializes in bringing top quality contemporary lighting from creative Spanish designers into the United States. The Marset TXL Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Flared Off-White textilene shadeWhite Acid-Etched glass diffuserCast iron base with slate, ready to be bolted into the groundSilver Grey finishComes with plug or can be hardwired, no switch on fixtureIP44 (damp rated for outdoor use)Made in SpainDesigned by Joan GasparOptions:Size: Large, or Small.Lighting:Large option utilizes two 23 Watt 120 Volt Type E26 Fluorescent lamps (not included).Small option utilizes three 13 Watt 120 Volt Type E26 Fluorescent lamps (not included).Shipping: This item usually ships in 5-7 business days. Dimensions: Large Fixture: Height 80 In. Small Fixture: Height 67 In. Small Shade: Diameter 22.8 In. Large Shade: Diameter 27.5 In.
Named after the Greek god of beginnings and transitions, the Robert Abbey Janus Floor Torchiere offers both a bit of the traditional look in its cylindrical Frosted inner glass shade and wrought iron base, and reaches into the future with metal accents and a convenient foot switch. Robert Abbey has been designing and manufacturing fine lighting since 1946. They offer a diverse collection--wall swingers, chandeliers, floor lamps and more--in a myriad of styles, from tradition to neoclassical to groovy. Collaborating with acclaimed designers Jonathan Adler, Rico Espinet and David Easton, Robert Abbey creates impeccable lighting that is perfect for modern everyday living. The Robert Abbey Janus Floor Torchiere is available with the following: Details:Cylindrical Topaz Seeded outer glass shadeCylindrical Frosted inner glass shadeWrought iron baseElectrochemical Phosphatized Iron finishOn-off foot switchUL ListedLighting: One 100 Watt 120 Volt Incandescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 2-3 weeks. Dimensions: Outer Shade: Height 9.5 In., Diameter 5 In. Inner Shade: Height 9 In., Diameter 3.5 In. Fixture: Height 68 In. Base: Height 2.25 In., Diameter 11 In.
The Bover Ferrara Swivel Floor Lamp uses rustic metal work to evoke the arts and crafts tradition in this full range lighting collection. The Ferrara Swivel Floor Lamp features a raw cotton or parchment shade with upper frosted polycarbonate diffuser paired with a Graphite Brown or Black iron body. The Bover collection, made in Barcelona, is inspired by the light playing within the sky and sea. Balancing quality and form resulting in a non-temporal style capable of adapting comfortably to future times. Bover's products range from ceiling lights, pendants, and wall sconces to floor and table lamps. The Bover Ferrara Swivel Floor Lamp is available with the following: Included Features:Flared shade.Frosted polycarbonate upper diffuser.Iron body.Foot switch on cord.UL Listed.Options:Finish: Black Iron (shown), or Graphite Brown Iron.Lamping: Fluorescent, or Incandescent.Shade: Cotton, or Parchment (shown).Lighting:Fluorescent option utilizes one 13 Watt 120 Volt Type GU24 Fluorescent lamp (not included).Incandescent option utilizes one 60 Watt 120 Volt Type A-19 Incandescent lamp (not included).Shipping: This item usually ships in 6-8 weeks. Dimensions: Fixture: Height 62.2 In., Width 16.54 In. Base: Overall Diameter 11.81 In. Shade: Upper Diameter 9.84 In., Lower Diameter 12.99 In., Height 7.09 In.
The Robert Abbey Janus Floor Lamp is named after the Greek god of beginnings and transitions. The design of the floor lamp lends itself to this name, featuring familiar neutral colors (giving a nod to the past) and accented by unique metal rings on the lamp's column (looking toward the future). A great piece for the transitional living space. Robert Abbey has been designing and manufacturing fine lighting since 1946. They offer a diverse collection--wall swingers, chandeliers, floor lamps and more--in a myriad of styles, from tradition to neoclassical to groovy. Collaborating with acclaimed designers Jonathan Adler, Rico Espinet and David Easton, Robert Abbey creates impeccable lighting that is perfect for modern everyday living. The Robert Abbey Janus Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Open Weave Heather linen shadeWrought iron baseElectrochemical Phosphatized Iron finish3-way switchUL ListedLighting: One 150 Watt 120 Volt Incandescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 2-3 weeks. Dimensions: Base: Height 2.25 In., Diameter 11.25 In. Fixture: Height 63 In. Shade: Upper Diameter 16.5 In., Height 14.5 In., Lower Diameter 17.5 In.
The Taller Uno Masai P Floor Lamp designed by Joan Auge projects a subtle textured light through a wicker shade creating an antique, rustic aura. The Masai P Floor Lamp features a Tan Wicker shade and wrought iron body with Forged Iron finish. The Taller Uno collection, made in Spain, features lighting that incorporates innovative combinations of wood and other materials. The Taller Uno Masai P Floor Lamp is available with the following: Included Features:Flared, Tan Wicker shade.Wrought iron body.Forged Iron finish.Foot switch on cord.UL Listed.Designed by Joan Auge.Lighting: One 100 Watt 120 Volt Type A-19 Incandescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 6-8 weeks. Dimensions: Fixture: Height 68.9 In., Overall Diameter 17.7 In. Shade: Height 17.3 In.
With its sleek, slim and shiny design, the AXO Light AX20 Floor Lamp was designed by Manuel Vivian to also provide superior task lighting well-suited to any contemporary setting. With swivels at every joint, the light can be adjusted up and down and from side-to-side until the absolute perfect task lighting orientation is achieved. Italy's AXO Light combines traditional Venetian glasswork and artisan craftwork with avant-garde lighting techniques and innovative materials. Their design philosophy is clear: use creativity and inspiration to create stunning lighting replete with value and emotion. The Axo Light AX20 Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Brass and iron shadeBrass and iron frameChrome finishLight beam can be manually adjustedDesigned by Manuel VivianLighting: One 60 Watt 120 Volt Type G9 Halogen lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 2 to 4 weeks. Dimensions: Base: Overall Diameter 9.88 In. Fixture: Height 37 In.
The Marset 3X3 Floor Lamp really stands out in a contemporary space because of its base's lightweight structure and the impressive volume of its shade. The tripod base is designed in two sections that are then joined by a bent iron rod. The orange electrical cable becomes part of the design and adds vibrant contrast to the base's White finish. Available in two sizes. Marset is a Barcelona-based company dedicated to creating warm contemporary lighting with a underlying sense of comfort and character, enhancing otherwise impersonal residential and commercial spaces. The Marset mood is minimalist, subtle, with an aesthetic appeal that stems from an "illuminate, not dazzle" philosophy. The Marset 3X3 Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Drum-shaped cotton shadeIron rod tripod baseWhite finishDimmer switchOrange electrical cableUL ListedDesigned by Chris JacksonOptions:Size: Large, or Medium.Lighting:Large option utilizes three 150 Watt 120 Volt Type E26 Medium Base Incandescent lamps (not included) or three 15 Watt 120 Volt Type E26 Fluorescent lamps (not included).Medium option utilizes three 100 Watt 120 Volt Type E26 Medium Base Incandescent lamps (not included) or three 15 Watt 120 Volt Type E26 Fluorescent lamps (not included).Shipping: This item usually ships in 6-8 weeks. Dimensions: Large Fixture: Diameter 39 In., Height Adjustable from 23.62 In. to 70 In. Medium Fixture: Height Adjustable from 17.3 In. to 53 In., Diameter 28 In.
A most versatile flower, the Hubbardton Forge Mobius Floor Lamp appears as a blooming bud, opening to reveal its own source of light. Its wrought iron base is height adjustable and rotates 125 degrees. The shade swivels from side to side and up and down. Floor dimmer. Hubbardton Forge, headquartered in Hubbardton, Vermont, hand-forges simple and elegant metal lighting fixtures and accessories, combining ancient hand-forging techniques with environmentally-sound finishing practices. The Hubbardton Forge Mobius Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Conical shadeHand-forged wrought iron baseAdjustable heightFloor dimmerUL ListedMade in the USA (of U.S. and imported parts)Options:Finish: Black, Bronze, Burnished Steel, Dark Smoke, Mahogany, or Natural Iron.Lamping: Fluorescent, or Incandescent.Shade: Spun Amber, or Spun Frost.Please Note: This item is hand-forged by master craftsmen and includes hand-blown glass. As a result, variations in finish appearance and small blemishes, bubbles, and variations in the color of the glass are a normal and desired result of handcrafted processes. Lighting:Fluorescent option utilizes one 14 Watt 120 Volt Fluorescent lamp (included).Incandescent option utilizes one 100 Watt 120 Volt Type A19 Medium Base Incandescent lamp (not included).Shipping: This item usually ships within 2-3 weeks. Dimensions: Base: Diameter 13.3 In. Fixture: Height Adjustable from 63.3 In. to 89.3 In., Width 66.9 In.
In the building industry, a scantling is an established set of dimensions for building materials. This term makes an apropos name for the Marset Scantling 15.7 Floor Lamp, with its unique blend of materials, basic geometric shapes and various adjustable arms and hinges evoking a definite industrial sensibility. Designed by Mathias Hahn. Marset is a Barcelona-based company dedicated to creating warm contemporary lighting with a underlying sense of comfort and character, enhancing otherwise impersonal residential and commercial spaces. The Marset mood is minimalist, subtle, with an aesthetic appeal that stems from an "illuminate, not dazzle" philosophy. The Marset Scantling 15.7 Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Cylindrical lacquered aluminum shadeLacquered iron base and stemAdjustable solid oak armFully rotating shadeOn/off switch on shadeUL ListedMade in SpainDesigned by Mathias Hahn, 2010Options:Finish: Stone Grey, or White.Lighting: One 20 Watt 120 Volt Type T3 Medium Base Compact Fluorescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships within 5-7 business days. Dimensions: Base: Diameter 9.45 In. Shade: Diameter 3.74 In., Height 7.68 In. Fixture: Height 47.72 In., Extension Adjustable to 15.75 In.
The Marset Scantling 28.8 Floor Lamp combines basic geometric shapes and the use of wood together with metal to give this lamp an approachable appearance and a clearly defined personality. The fully rotating shade uses arms and hinges, negating the need for springs or counterweights. Marset is a Barcelona-based company dedicated to creating warm contemporary lighting with a underlying sense of comfort and character, enhancing otherwise impersonal residential and commercial spaces. The Marset mood is minimalist, subtle, with an aesthetic appeal that stems from an "illuminate, not dazzle" philosophy. The Marset Scantling 28.8 Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Cylindrical lacquered aluminum shadeLacquered iron column and baseAdjustable solid oak armsFully rotating shadeSwitched at fixtureUL ListedMade in SpainDesigned by Mathias HahnOptions:Finish: Stone Grey, or White.Lighting: One 20 Watt 120 Volt E26 Type T3 Compact Fluorescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships within 5-7 business days. Dimensions: Shade: Diameter 4.53 In., Height 7.85 In. Base: Diameter 11.22 In. Fixture: Height 53.62 In., Width 28.82 In.
The Robert Abbey Shinto Tripod Floor Lamp designed by Rico Espinet has a clearly defined outline enhanced by the large Ascot White fabric shade with Black contrast trim. The Shinto Tripod Floor Lamp also features a Wrought Iron finish over steel, and a 3 Way Switch for lighting control. Robert Abbey has been designing and manufacturing fine lighting since 1946. They offer a diverse collection--wall swingers, chandeliers, floor lamps and more--in a myriad of styles, from tradition to neoclassical to groovy. Collaborating with acclaimed designers Jonathan Adler, Rico Espinet and David Easton, Robert Abbey creates impeccable lighting that is perfect for modern everyday living. The Robert Abbey Shinto Tripod Floor Lamp is available with the following: Details:Large drum-shaped, Ascot White fabric shade with Black trimSteel bodyWrought Iron finish3-way switchDesigned by Rico EspinetUL ListedLighting: One 150 Watt 120 Volt Type A Incandescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships in 2-3 weeks. Dimensions: Fixture: Height 62.5 In. Base: Diameter 19.25 In. Shade: Upper Diameter 22 In., Lower Diameter 23 In., Height 10.5 In.
The Hubbardton Forge Almost Infinity Floor Lamp employs an architectural simplicity combined with a beautiful verticality. The Almost Infinity Floor Lamp features hand-forged wrought iron, fabric shade, and translucent finishes. Hubbardton Forge, headquartered in Hubbardton, Vermont, hand-forges simple and elegant metal lighting fixtures and accessories, combining ancient hand-forging techniques with environmentally-sound finishing practices. The Hubbardton Forge Almost Infinity Floor Lamp is available with the following: Included Features: Hand-forged, wrought-iron body. Translucent, powder-coated finish. UL Listed. Options: Size: Large, or Small. Finish: Bronze (shown), Dark Smoke, or Mahogany.Lighting: One 150 Watt 120 Volt Type A 3-Way Medium Base Incandescent lamp (not included). Shipping: This item usually ships within 2-3 weeks. Dimensions: Small Fixture: Overall Height 57.25 In., Length 10.1 In., Width 10.1 In. Large Fixture: Overall Height 60.5 In., Length 11 In., Width 11 In.
The Hubbardton Forge Formae Contemporary Floor Lamp looks attractive in its unadorned setup that offers tranquility while charm pervades your space. The Formae Contemporary Floor Lamp features fabric shade and hand-forged wrought iron body. Hubbardton Forge, headquartered in Hubbardton, Vermont, hand-forges simple and elegant metal lighting fixtures and accessories, combining ancient hand-forging techniques with environmentally-sound finishing practices. The Hubbardton Forge Formae Contemporary Floor Lamp is available with the following: Included Features:Fabric shade.Hand-forged wrought iron body.Dimmer switch.Options:Finish: Black, Bronze, Burnished Steel, Dark Smoke, Mahogany, or Natural Iron.Shade: Doeskin Micro-Suede, Eclipse Micro-Suede, Natural Anna, or Terra Micro-Suede.Lighting: Two 100 Watt 120 Volt Type A Medium Base Incandescent lamps (not included). Please Note: This item is hand-forged by master craftsmen and includes hand-blown glass. As a result, variations in finish appearance and small blemishes, bubbles, and variations in the color of the glass are a normal and desired result of handcrafted processes. Shipping: This item usually ships within 2-3 weeks. Dimensions: Fixture: Overall Height 58.1 In. Shade: Diameter 19.5 In. Base: Length 12 In., Width 8.6 In.
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Floor Iron Girl
Whats best for removing iron oxide from concrete surface?
I have iron oxide on the basement floor due to a failed sump. Flooded floor has resulted in iron oxide residue to be left on the surface of the concrete. Any suggestions?
Yes. the 50/50 mix of water and Muratic acid will do the best job but be sure to wear the proper mask and ventilate the area if you can. The fumes are extremely toxic.
I don't totaly agree on the genras you put your bands under, but otherwise nice question.
Punk Rock- THE CLASH- Clampdown Prog Rock- Pink Floyd(Later days)- Wish You Were Here Acid Rock?- Jimi Hendrix- Purple Haze Heavy Metal- Black Sabbath- N.I.B. Britpop- Blur- Song 2 Electric Folk- Led Zeppelin- Battle of Evermore (ITS FOLK!!!!) Glam- Queen- Another One Bites the Dust Grunge- Nirvana- Lithium Heartland Rock- Bruce Springsteen – EVERYTHING (I love Bruce) New Wave- Billy Idol- Dancing With Myself Pop Rock- Psychedelic- Pink Floyd(Early Days)- Astronomy Donime Soft Rock- Billy Joel- Piano Man Rock and Roll-????? I guess everything? Space Rock- Yet Again, PINK FLOYD
I dont know the rest of those groups good enough to say my favorite band/ song
That would actually depend on the material they gave you. If it is exactly the same material, then it will probably need to be stitched on. However, they may have given you iron-on patch material. If you still have any of your documentation, see if tells you how to patch your tent, or check with the manufacturer's website for more information.
I've capitalized anything that's different in my version. I've indicated my deletions with: [...]
I haven't changed any punctuation.
I reached towards the burning iron, despair and fear engulfed me, I stared into his eyes, THEY WERE wild and lust-filled. He pressed it to my stomach, screams of agony escaping my mouth as the excruciating pain droaned on [...] (cliche, cut it). I closed my eyes, the screams never fading [...] NEVER stopping. I bolted upright in bed, the useless blankets falling off me. Perspiration dribbled down my forehead and I felt my dark brown hair cling against both sides of my face. My eyes widened in shock but then realisation kicked in; it was only a dream. I sighed a sigh of relief and fell back onto my white pillows, either end folding up as my head fell into the middle. The blackness of the night seeped through my window, casting a [...] (keep it subtle) shadow upon my bedroom floor. "Ruby!" I darted my eyes over to where my name was called, and relief spread over me instantly when Elodie was stood in front of the door, a worried expression covering her pale face. She ran over to me [...], her midnight black hair rustling behind her [...] WHEN she eventually stopped in front of me, she placed a palm over my forehead and her eyebrows knitted together in ANTICIPATION (sp) (also, anticipation of what?). The cool ice [...] soothed me as I closed my eyes once more. "Ruby why did you scream?" Elodie asked, and I heard the concern in her voice. "Bad dream I guess." I muttered, catching her hand and placing it by her side. "Elodie, I'm fin-" I started, but I stopped as her worried expression changed into something I have never seen before, something I never thought I would see [...] ON her. Fear. "Elodie, whats the matter?" I asked, as she continued to stare out of my open bedroom window, she turned back to me, her nostrils flaring. She simply shook her head, "THEY'RE (sp) here." "Who's here, Elodie?" I asked, placing a palm on her arm but she shrugged away and rushed over to my window, pulling it shut in one swift movement and locking it in the process.
Very nicely done. I like the way the power in the relationship changes hands from the Elodie, who puts a palm on the narrator's head, to the narrator at the end when she lays her hand on Elodie's arm.
My Suggestions are just that – suggestions. Some things I thought would read better if a word was substituted for a different word, or left out altogether. But you're the writer and in the end its up to you. Also there were a couple typo's I noticed that I thought it might be helpful to highlight for you:
You wrote: Antisipation, its Anticipation Also "Their here" — wrong there, its They're here.
O and I've said about the cliche as well. I say "cut it" but again, it up to you.
wow that's amazing I didn't know that when I used to play that game a long time ago. Nice, would've helped.
Hmmm…yea, alrighty now…good luck with all that…
I don't totaly agree on the genras you put your bands under, but otherwise nice question.
Punk Rock- THE CLASH- Clampdown
Prog Rock- Pink Floyd(Later days)- Wish You Were Here
Acid Rock?- Jimi Hendrix- Purple Haze
Heavy Metal- Black Sabbath- N.I.B.
Britpop- Blur- Song 2
Electric Folk- Led Zeppelin- Battle of Evermore (ITS FOLK!!!!)
Glam- Queen- Another One Bites the Dust
Grunge- Nirvana- Lithium
Heartland Rock- Bruce Springsteen – EVERYTHING (I love Bruce)
New Wave- Billy Idol- Dancing With Myself
Pop Rock-
Psychedelic- Pink Floyd(Early Days)- Astronomy Donime
Soft Rock- Billy Joel- Piano Man
Rock and Roll-????? I guess everything?
Space Rock- Yet Again, PINK FLOYD
I dont know the rest of those groups good enough to say my favorite band/ song
ugh… someone already posted this one up….
That would actually depend on the material they gave you. If it is exactly the same material, then it will probably need to be stitched on. However, they may have given you iron-on patch material. If you still have any of your documentation, see if tells you how to patch your tent, or check with the manufacturer's website for more information.
It cuts off but it sounds really good so far(:
I've capitalized anything that's different in my version. I've indicated my deletions with: [...]
I haven't changed any punctuation.
I reached towards the burning iron, despair and fear engulfed me, I stared into his eyes, THEY WERE wild and lust-filled. He pressed it to my stomach, screams of agony escaping my mouth as the excruciating pain droaned on [...] (cliche, cut it). I closed my eyes, the screams never fading [...] NEVER stopping.
I bolted upright in bed, the useless blankets falling off me. Perspiration dribbled down my forehead and I felt my dark brown hair cling against both sides of my face. My eyes widened in shock but then realisation kicked in; it was only a dream. I sighed a sigh of relief and fell back onto my white pillows, either end folding up as my head fell into the middle. The blackness of the night seeped through my window, casting a [...] (keep it subtle) shadow upon my bedroom floor. "Ruby!" I darted my eyes over to where my name was called, and relief spread over me instantly when Elodie was stood in front of the door, a worried expression covering her pale face. She ran over to me [...], her midnight black hair rustling behind her [...] WHEN she eventually stopped in front of me, she placed a palm over my forehead and her eyebrows knitted together in ANTICIPATION (sp) (also, anticipation of what?). The cool ice [...] soothed me as I closed my eyes once more. "Ruby why did you scream?" Elodie asked, and I heard the concern in her voice.
"Bad dream I guess." I muttered, catching her hand and placing it by her side.
"Elodie, I'm fin-" I started, but I stopped as her worried expression changed into something I have never seen before, something I never thought I would see [...] ON her. Fear. "Elodie, whats the matter?" I asked, as she continued to stare out of my open bedroom window, she turned back to me, her nostrils flaring.
She simply shook her head, "THEY'RE (sp) here."
"Who's here, Elodie?" I asked, placing a palm on her arm but she shrugged away and rushed over to my window, pulling it shut in one swift movement and locking it in the process.
Very nicely done. I like the way the power in the relationship changes hands from the Elodie, who puts a palm on the narrator's head, to the narrator at the end when she lays her hand on Elodie's arm.
My Suggestions are just that – suggestions. Some things I thought would read better if a word was substituted for a different word, or left out altogether. But you're the writer and in the end its up to you. Also there were a couple typo's I noticed that I thought it might be helpful to highlight for you:
You wrote: Antisipation, its Anticipation
Also "Their here" — wrong there, its They're here.
O and I've said about the cliche as well. I say "cut it" but again, it up to you.
I hope this is helpful.
Keep writing & Good Luck!
wow, your really very much creative!